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Unread 10-18-2019, 03:49 PM
Susan McLean Susan McLean is offline
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Peter, I interpreted his "roguish tricks" as an allusion to sex, not thievery, which explains why she jumps into bed and laughs.

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Unread 10-19-2019, 06:54 AM
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Spindleshanks Spindleshanks is offline
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Further edits posted. I might call this a wrap now. There may be room for further improvement, but I believe I've taken it as far as I am able within the bounds of my expertise.

Thanks, Susan, for your useful comments and suggestions.

The vibrant Translation board of a few years ago seems just a fond memory. I had hoped for more.
Oh well.

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