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All three are powerful, but the first one says it all. Kudos.
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I agree with Catherine. Kudos, Julie.

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I especially liked the second one. The heretic Samaritan had ready cash available and, no doubt, guards to protect himself from thieves.
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Julie,
Congratulations. These are devastating.

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Congratulations, Julie. Well done.
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Top notch, Julie. My compliments!
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Expressed with the edge of a knife.
Thank you, not for the salve, not for the balm, but for the calm in your rage. I'm angry too, so thank you...
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Thanks for the encouragement, all you good neighbors.

Allen, you mention another reasonable interpretation of the Good Samaritan story. (As I recall, Martin Luther King, Jr., said something similar in his "I Have Been to the Mountaintop" speech.)

For the purposes of my poem, though, I prefer to think that the priest and Levite were simply avoiding the ritual impurity of touching a corpse, in case the victim died while they were tending him. (Numbers 19:11, Leviticus 21:1-4, 11). The following commentary rings true to me:

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It is essential to the point of the story that the traveller was left half-dead. The priest and the Levite could not tell without touching him whether he was dead or alive; and it weighed more with them that he might be dead and defiling to the touch of those whose business was with holy things than that he might be alive and in need of care." George Bradford Caird, The Gospel of St. Luke, Black, 1968, p. 148
I see the priest and Levite as caring much more about maintaining their own status than they cared about potentially saving a vulnerable person's life. In contrast, the Samaritan just saw someone who needed help that he was in a position to give, so he gave it, regardless of any other considerations.

Saving themselves from the excommunication threatened by documents like the 1962 Crimen sollicitationis instruction (and earlier, similar rules) weighed more with many non-rapists in the Church than saving kids from rapists did. The Vatican's policy of omertà depended on the obedience of cowards willing to sacrifice children on the altar of their own perceived spiritual well-being, or perhaps on the altar of their own career advancement. Help only came from "Samaritans" like St. Mary MacKillop, who were willing to accept the price of excommunication for their insubordination when they refused to keep silent, or from people outside the Church who didn't care about threats of excommunication.

Since the bit about the priest and Levite risking ritual impurity if they helped the victim isn't widely known, I'll probably provide an endnote to that effect if I ever publish a book. But for the New Verse News, I felt that I had too many epigraphs already.

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I just want to observe how skillfully you tweak and change the meaning of the repetends in the triolets. Well done, Julie.
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