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Unread 08-05-2020, 11:40 AM
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The third. But I’m surprised this is even a problem; the meter prevents too many words in a line. When I get home, and if I can log in to this site, I will type out some George Starbuck limericks to show you; but he was purposefully breaking the line limit.
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Unread 08-05-2020, 11:52 AM
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Actually, Max, PM me your email and I will send pictures of the page, which is easier.
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Unread 08-05-2020, 11:54 AM
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How many of your limericks have extra-long lines? Do you have lots like this, then?

There was a young man from Japan,
Whose limericks just wouldn't scan.
When asked why this was,
He said, "It's because
I always try to get as many words in the last line as I possibly can."

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Unread 08-05-2020, 03:27 PM
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This is the 21st century. There are thousands of ways of resizing anything and everything until it all fits together. You shouldn't accept typographic imperfections in your book.
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Unread 08-05-2020, 03:29 PM
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Thanks, Walter. I've PM'd you.

No, Jayne. No limericks like that in the book. Just 3-4 (out of more than 150) which don't fit, mostly due to a lot of one-syllable words and silent letters. And long last lines aren't the real problem. It's (typographically) long second lines.
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No, Jayne. No limericks like that in the book. Just 3-4 (out of more than 150) which don't fit, mostly due to a lot of one-syllable words and silent letters. And long last lines aren't the real problem. It's (typographically) long second lines.
I've got a brilliant idea, Max! Just leave out those 3-4 that don't fit and stick with a book of 150+ limericks.
Sorted!!!

Jayne
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Just so you know that it's NOT only Allen and Walter who have opinions, I too vote for #3, in both its variants--if it's really, truly not possible to adjust page size or type size for the book.
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Unread 08-05-2020, 05:55 PM
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Thank you, Maryann. That's helpful.
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Unread 08-05-2020, 06:13 PM
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Have I offended you with my light-hearted suggestion, Max? It was not my intention so I'm sorry if I've upset you.

Considering that limericks are funny, you seem to be taking this very seriously, without a glimmer of your usual humor.

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Unread 08-05-2020, 08:45 PM
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I, too, would go with No. 3, in either variant.

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