I love your winged beings although I do not fully understand the first one which seems to be a page of a book with wings drawn on an existing figure. Does this have some significance?
What I would like to see is the images alongside the corresponding stanza, or even the text and images integrated.
The code to place an image in your thread is very simple. Simply type in the URL between image tags. (ignore my asterisks - if i didn't put the asterisks the computer would try to obey the code and then it wouldn't show up at all.)
[*img]*URL goes here
You can go into edit on this post of mine and see it in action.
The images show up at actual size - so If you would like them smaller, I'm afraid that would mean making a smaller version and uploading the whole business again, a pain, I know, but at this size it would separate the stanzas so much it would wreck the flow.