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Unread 08-18-2007, 11:42 AM
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Originally posted by Anne Bryant-Hamon:

True love is blind, no eyes are here required
the mind can give us all we have desired
As nurses came, prepared to make the bed,
She slid her walker, kissed her husband's head.

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Unread 08-18-2007, 03:30 PM
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I've learned that I can't even write in couplets,
I wanted twins and wound up with sex tuplettes.
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Unread 08-19-2007, 03:37 PM
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He turned to leave politely at her door.
She kissed him, moved him back. He's back for more.
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Unread 08-19-2007, 05:44 PM
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Some ladies still appreciate a certain kind of fellow
Whose passion is exuberance mixed with meekness, mild and mellow


BTW, Frank, thanks for your comment on my Perseid Promise poem over on MET.
I am thanking you here so as not to needlessly bump it back up.

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A Judas Kiss


The ocean wind's a kiss of promise to the mariner:
a harlot's gesture which the fool accepts as his alone.

Lured by crestless swells he tumbled to her furrow: she sucked
his strength and left him resting, breathless on her salt-stained bed.



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Unread 08-19-2007, 08:04 PM
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A malcontent relies on a red herring
to spoil the fun of those who came for merrying


This was supposed to have been a thread of sensual couplets, wasn't it? I seem to have been knocked off track by a UFO

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A couplet's such a strait-laced thing;
Can't we go straight to coupling?

Frank O

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There is no legal way for them to wed,
But that won't keep them off the wedding bed.
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Unread 08-20-2007, 10:20 PM
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There was a man once so caught up in Christ
It broke the law to speak of paradise
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Unread 08-21-2007, 09:34 PM
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Last night back home unduly late,
Eyes pick through breakfast doubts and hate.


Anne, any ideas for a new challenge? What this taught me is that I don't really know what "sensual" is.
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