I enjoyed this. One thing you could do (not as an improvement, but an alternative) is break it out into smaller, more concise poems.
I could see the comments / answers working by themselves, and not needing to be tied into a bigger list. And you could play with it and see how minimal you could get with both.
And, yes, Christine, emotionally true. That's certainly a more economical way to put it, haha. I guess I was confused at what you were getting at.
Well, then, we've both confused and then enlightened the other, so no harm done. And I do better with genomic statements like yours when I am not so sleepy deprived as I was at the time
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