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Unread 06-30-2001, 03:55 AM
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This poem is what I would state as my favourite poem if asked. It is Goethe's Vanitas! and in its German original runs like this:


Vanitas!
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Ich hab' meine Sach' auf nichts gestellt, juchhe!
Drum ist so wohl mir in der Welt, juchhe!
Und wer will meine Kamerade sein,
Der stosse mit an, der stimme mit ein
Bei dieser Neige Wein.

Ich stellt' meine Sach' auf Geld und Gut, juchhe!
Darüber verlor ich Freud' und Mut, o weh!
Die Münze rollte hier und dort,
Und hascht' ich sie an einem Ort,
Am andern war sie fort.

Auf Weiber stellt' ich nun meine Sach', juchhe!
[Daher]* mir kam viel Ungemach, o weh!
Die Falsche sucht' sich ein ander Teil,
Die Treue macht' mir Langeweil,
Die Beste war nicht feil.

Ich stellt' meine Sach' auf Reis' und Fahrt, juchhe!
Und ließ meine Vaterlandesart, o weh!
Und mir behagt' es nirgends recht,
Die Kost war fremd, das Bett war schlecht,
Niemand verstand mich recht.

Ich stellt' meine Sach' auf Ruhm und Ehr', juchhe!
Und sieh', gleich hat ein andrer mehr, o weh!
Wie ich mich hatt' hervorgetan,
Da sah'n die Leute scheel mich an,
Hatte keinem Recht getan.

Ich setzt' meine Sach' auf Kampf und Krieg, juchhe!
Und uns gelang so mancher Sieg, juchhe!
Wir zogen in Feindes Land hinein,
Dem Freunde sollt's nicht viel besser sein,
Und ich verlor ein Bein.

Nun hab' ich meine Sach' auf nichts gestellt, juchhe!
Und mein gehört die ganze Welt, juchhe!
Zu Ende geht nun Sang und Schmaus;
Nur trinkt mir alle Neigen aus,
Die letzte muß heraus!


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This translation into English was done by Swedish-Japanese Buddhist scholar Wm. Flygare, a man I wish I could have met before he died:


My thought's on n'ought!
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My thoughts 'n' oughts are nothing fixed
Hooray!
for Joy's the world that's downed unmixed
this way!
and all who'd be good mates of mine
to clink 'n' drink just suit me fine
for lees of life and wine!


I'd trained my trade on gold 'n' gain
Hooray!
but so I sold my joy for pain;
I say,
the coins were rolling here and there,
but every time I chased a where
the here was over there.


To women then I gave my heart
O belles!
but how those damsels made me smart
o hells!
The false were true to others, true,
but true ones bored me through and through;
the best ... were not for woo.


Next, I thought I ought to roam
Hooray!
but then I lost my ways of home,
that way,
and nothing seemed to suit me quite,
the board was bad, the bed a fright,
and no one got me right.


I tuned my dream to name and fame
Excel!
but better men put me to shame
O hell!
or when I gave some good I had
they made me out to be a cad;
my good was worse than bad.


I sought the right in battle might
Hooray!
and often was our might so right
(hooray!)
the enemy's land was ours to run;
but still the score was won to none,
and a leg became undone.


So now I call my calling nought
So what!
The world's all mine that comes unsought
that's what!
Now that it's song and sup all day,
come clink 'n' drink me all the way
these lees to the last hooray!



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Svein Olav
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