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08-17-2018, 09:37 AM
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Mike Juster on 'Rattle' today
For his poem "Heirloom."
I find the poem impressive in being able to find a simple yet convincing objective correlative and, also, in the way Mike is able to use tet couplets for something other than humor.
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08-17-2018, 01:20 PM
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I like how sexy it is.
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08-17-2018, 01:50 PM
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Hey, this is attractive and great. Congratulations!
P.S. Oh, after Andrew’s remark, not that I was ever under any doubt that tet couplets could avail something more than humor, but it is true indeed that HEIRLOOM shines as an impressive specimen.
Last edited by Erik Olson; 08-18-2018 at 04:45 AM.
Reason: Coming to, I had to fix last sentence. This after dentist, that laughing gas no joke. Oh the horror of residual dumbness!
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08-17-2018, 06:13 PM
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What a wonderful metaphor.
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08-18-2018, 08:12 PM
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Way to go, Mike!
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08-19-2018, 10:12 PM
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Satirical and mysterious at once. Congrats, Michael!
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08-21-2018, 06:18 PM
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Thanks, everyone! I am very grateful for your comments.
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08-24-2018, 06:15 PM
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Just saw this today -- lovely poem, and congrats, Mike!
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08-24-2018, 07:58 PM
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One beautiful tomatopoem.
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