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06-28-2018, 08:26 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2012
Location: Australia
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Beautiful work Cally. Made my day.
Arena's a great rag. Great to see my hometown get a mention here.
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06-29-2018, 04:22 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Australia
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Again, my thanks!
And Damian -- g'day! Glad to have made the day of someone who knows what Arena means to Melbourne (greatest city on earth, after Hobart, of course -- my hometown).
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06-29-2018, 01:01 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Venice, Italy
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Cally, terrific poems. And each one so different from the others. Difficult to express a preference but I think I'll go with the "Child at the Bay of Fires" - a wonderful and very touching picture of childhood. Thanks, Cally.
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06-29-2018, 05:30 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: Florida, USA
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Magnificent, Calligraphy!! Magnificent Calligraphy! With or without a comma, these are spectacular. I already am in love with “Child at the Bay of Fires.” But “Only the Surface Breaks” will be with me for the long haul. So much in all of these. Stick-to-the-heart poems.
Bending like a wave,
Arrow
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06-29-2018, 08:03 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: Arkansas, USA
Posts: 602
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A Game of Chess, that beautifully rendered human narrative, may be what I needed most right now. Thank you. But you know I find your immersion of self in what's around you truly poetic. These are admirable, every one. I, too, await the collection (whenever you feel ready).
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07-03-2018, 04:58 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Australia
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Gregory, Arrow and Mark --- thank you, from my heart.
Cally
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07-04-2018, 01:08 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2001
Location: New York, NY
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Congrats, Chrissie! "Things I've Done" rocks, and "A Game of Chess" too!
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