[Cally Conan-Davies]

Bonza, Sharkey!!

Cally

[Julie Steiner]

"Mourn with Mark McDonnell"--heh.

I'm pleased that this lovely poem of raw, bewildering grief has found a wider audience.

[Nausheen Eusuf]

It's beautiful, Mark -- congrats! It really captures a boy's perspective and voice.

Nausheen

[Mark McDonnell]

Thanks Cally, Julie and Nausheen - I'm really glad you like the poem. That's what counts.

Edit: I appear to have been knocked off the top spot now, so when you click the link you have to scroll down to find me.

[Julie Steiner]

Generally, on such sites, if you click on the header of a poem, you activate a link to just that poem. Here's yours, Mark:

http://www.inksweatandtears.co.uk/pages/?p=16637

[Mark McDonnell]

Oh, thanks Julie! I'm a dunce.

I pasted it into my first post. Pay no attention to those other poems!!