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Unread 08-24-2019, 07:03 PM
John Isbell John Isbell is offline
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Hi Susan,

I've arrived just now in your fruitful discussion with Julie and reading the German, it seems to me that you've got it now in your English page. I like the tilt of the brow, and I like hands later. I like Coming capitalized, I see it as the Second Coming, which if you exist outside time has a different appearance. The only nuance I regret losing in the English is the series of subjunctives at the end, which are rather lovely, but which English won't allow for, that I can see.

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John
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