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Unread 02-22-2018, 11:54 AM
Matt Q Matt Q is online now
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They flee from me (Valentine’s night special)

Well, perhaps it is unwise to,
but I’m planning to surprise you,
because today’s a very special day.

Now I’m pacing in the dark
while I’m waiting in the park;
I know you like to walk from work this way.

And it’s true I do feel nervous,
still, there’s no one to observe us,
and I’ve cleaned my teeth and shaved and had a bath.

And I’m sure it will go fine;
I just need my opening line.
No time to waste: you’re walking down the path.

Now I don’t want to blow it
So I pick my favourite poet:
Sir Thomas Wyatt. Now I cannot miss!

Well it’s too late to change tack,
so I open up my mac,
and speak the words: ‘dear heart, how like you this?’

Apparently Americans aren't familiar with the word "mac". It's a Mackintosh -- a full-length raincoat.
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Unread 02-06-2019, 07:04 PM
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RCL RCL is offline
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Location: Los Angeles, CA
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Here's a bump up of last year's offerings for the sacred day of Valentine, especially to note the last two by Matt Q.

Any new contributions?
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Unread 04-26-2019, 04:27 PM
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Gail White Gail White is offline
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Location: Breaux Bridge, LA, USA
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What, no women entered this? I'll try to think of something.

Okay, here’s one.


My brain is like a piece of cheese
that quivers with a million mites.
My brain is like a fast ballet
where all the dancers split their tights.
My brain is like a Ferris wheel
whose rusted gears have ceased to work.
My brain is bleaker than all these
because my love is such a jerk.

My brain is like a wildebeest
that hears a lurking lion roar.
My brain is like a movie crowd
stampeding for the exit door.
My brain is on a shopping spree,
the birthday of my life has come!
Because my love is such a jerk
and finally I’ve dumped the bum.

Last edited by Gail White; 04-30-2019 at 08:49 PM.
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Unread 05-06-2019, 11:50 AM
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Felicity Teague Felicity Teague is offline
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Nice one, Gail (especially for the wildebeest) :-)
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