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02-01-2018, 02:06 PM
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The Asses of Parnassus
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02-01-2018, 02:13 PM
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Susan. That is short, witty, formal and true. A perfect ass in other words. (And I'm writing this on my phone whilst ignoring my family!)
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02-01-2018, 02:13 PM
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A grim but good one, Susan. That last line slams it shut. Well done!
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02-01-2018, 08:00 PM
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Love it. Our own devices, indeed.
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02-02-2018, 08:47 AM
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...Congratulations! ~,:^)
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02-02-2018, 09:59 AM
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Excellent, Susan!! Bull’s Eye.
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02-02-2018, 11:02 AM
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We may not be able to teach an old dog new tricks, but you've given an old phrase a truly contemporary, if disconcerting, twist!
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02-02-2018, 05:05 PM
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Lively intelligence, tight structure, this is exactly the sort of stuff a good epigram zine should be publishing.
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02-02-2018, 07:04 PM
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Zeroes in with concision! Congratulations, Susan!
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