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Unread 12-19-2001, 07:23 PM
Chao Chao is offline
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Thanks to Kate Benedic,

Thanks to your post that I know better the rule for a regular Haiku, and I would like to know if there is any irregular form of Haiku that is accepted, or not. Besides, is there any rule about stressed or unstressed syllables, or, rule about rhyme etc...

Thanks in advance for your help

Cha`o
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Unread 01-03-2002, 05:47 PM
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Oh the screen does buzz
Its players soon zombies be
Type your life away.

This is stupid but oh well!

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*~*Megan*~*
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Unread 02-05-2002, 06:46 PM
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It's a bit hard for me to make a poem on technology, however, I found this thread valuable, therefore, I just like to post this to pop the message up:

gaze up the sky, moon
bow down to the earth, flower
only you are both

Chao
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Unread 02-19-2002, 08:46 AM
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Image frozen on
phosphorescent glass -
a fatal error!



[This message has been edited by Robert Swagman (edited February 21, 2002).]
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Unread 02-19-2002, 07:09 PM
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Prurient jackal:
The damned thing, the spitting crack.
Hard drives onward/Pops.



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Unread 02-19-2002, 07:23 PM
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Forgive the quality, it was on the spur (I couldn't resist)

Play my mp3!
And surf the internet!
D'oh, why's it so slow?!
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Unread 02-21-2002, 06:30 AM
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Communication -
rapid bits of energy
pulsing through the net.
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Unread 02-25-2002, 07:45 PM
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control control alt
delete history an then
icq new men
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Unread 02-26-2002, 07:07 PM
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Mindless programming -
point the remote and click 'Off';
the mind powers down.
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