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Unread 01-04-2020, 07:29 AM
Andrew Szilvasy Andrew Szilvasy is offline
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My poem "Owl Stretching Time," workshopped here last year, I believe, is up at Barren Magazine.

Thanks for all your help.

EDIT: A link, of course, would be helpful. Sorry.

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Unread 01-04-2020, 03:11 PM
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Congrats, Andrew.
Nice job.
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Congrats, Andrew! I enjoyed the poem with its great use of anaphora and rather frightening characterization.

It reminds me of a strange guy who was my roommate once. He bought a BB gun, and one day I came home to find holes in my metal cabinet. I moved out soon after.

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