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12-31-2020, 01:22 PM
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Boy Blue
Workshopped here, "Boy Blue" is up at Jerry Jazz Musician. Thanks for the critical crits!
https://jerryjazzmusician.com/2020/1...-2020-edition/
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Last edited by RCL; 12-31-2020 at 01:32 PM.
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01-01-2021, 10:39 AM
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Congrats, Ralph! I had missed this poem when it was on the Met board, so I'm glad for this opportunity to see it.
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01-01-2021, 01:26 PM
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Oooh, your poem is fab - what a fantastic piece of storytelling in a few short lines - and the rest of the journal is interesting, too. There's a couple of other poems in there that have brightened my reading this afternoon & introduced me to new authors. Thank-you!
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01-02-2021, 01:34 AM
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Nice one, Ralph, I really enjoyed it. Congratulations on the fine work and placement for it!
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01-02-2021, 06:21 AM
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Congratulations, Ralph! I remember reading this one on the boards a while back.
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01-03-2021, 11:35 AM
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Thanks, fellow writers! I’m glad you like the tale. I get lucky once in a while.
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