Hey Chris,
Edith Grossman's translations of Spanish poems are pretty bad, IMO. In fact -- and I know this sounds snarky and arrogant, but it is true -- reading her collection of poems from the Spanish Golden Age is the main reason I started translating poems from the Spanish Golden Age, because I was sure it could be done better.
Anyway, that doesn't help with your query. I haven't dipped into Sor Juana yet myself, so I don't know which translations to recommend. (But I bet Bob's are good.)
David R.
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