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Unread 04-28-2004, 05:02 PM
Kathy Gay Kathy Gay is offline
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lol...I didn't realize the poem-next-to-the-pic thingie was up and running. Just found the links. Cool.
Maybe someone could take that silliness of mine down and I'll get with the program? Can I safely assume then that yours, Jerry, will be alongside Sig.&Roy?

Oh well, here's one to go after my leaf 'ku:

Series 2

destination found
in the underground of Hell
breasts, the river Styx


[This message has been edited by Kathy Gay (edited April 28, 2004).]
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Unread 04-28-2004, 05:31 PM
Jerry Glenn Hartwig Jerry Glenn Hartwig is offline
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It's up there now.

C',om Kathy, someone has to use the finak image to end the poem, hopefully making sense from it.

You've just been drafted *grin*




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Unread 04-28-2004, 06:11 PM
Sharon Passmore Sharon Passmore is offline
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Final image? no no no no let's keep going.
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Unread 04-28-2004, 11:18 PM
Sharon Passmore Sharon Passmore is offline
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Kathy, I'm a bit confused - which poem do you want taken down?
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Unread 04-29-2004, 03:25 AM
Kathy Gay Kathy Gay is offline
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Sharon,

The one about the catsup should come down as it doesn't pertain to any image, I was just adding on to Jerry's. I don't really care if it stays up or not. Whatever you want.

The 'ku can go beneath my other 'ku in Series 2, if that's ok. Sorry I passed my confusion on!

Kathy
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Unread 04-29-2004, 01:37 PM
Jerry Glenn Hartwig Jerry Glenn Hartwig is offline
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I meant the final image in series one, unless you were going to add more to it.
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