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Unread 09-09-2009, 02:52 PM
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Yes, maybe even too good for the contest, but I'd enter it just the same.
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Unread 09-11-2009, 11:20 AM
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- always a contest behind . . . .

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Yes, maybe even too good for the contest, but I'd enter it just the same.
Nope, way too good. Don't bother entering.
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Thanks for the responses, everyone. I've gone ahead and entered the poem. It was inspired partly by my shock on learning, every time I have taught Brave New World to my students, that some of them can't see anything wrong with the world described in it. They wish they were there.

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Unread 09-12-2009, 11:34 AM
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That's good, though I think the poem will have a life beyond the contest whether it wins or loses.
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I wish I were there.
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Marion, I hope you haven't read the book recently if you think so.

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Susan, it's just that it beats this crappy world by a landslide.
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