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Unread 11-12-2011, 08:52 AM
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Effort number 2:

‘Round November ,
Under its sky,
Scuds of leaves
Skate and fly.
Emerald’s embers,
They fill the streets,
They swell with rains,
Heap up in piles,
En-clog the drains.
Reddish leaves are
Easily seen
And routed by a
Power blower-
Evictor grim- of
Russet; the reaper.

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Unread 11-12-2011, 09:45 AM
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Why Now?

When I
Have gotten over you
You vow

Never to leave again.
Okay,
Why now?

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Krakatoa

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Unread 11-12-2011, 01:59 PM
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Until the Fat Lady Sings

Maria's
Ululations:
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Until I glanced down,
Narcissus, and found
That face near the ground,
I wore a frown,
Life seemed so long.
Then we became fond
Here by the pond,
Ensnared in our song.
Reclining, I see
Each line of your face,
Which I mentally trace
As you worship me.
Still, it could be true
You're not that discrete,
Oh, but we weren’t complete,
Until there was you.
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Very funny, Frank. I particularly like the play on "discrete."

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