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Old 07-29-2018, 07:22 AM
David Callin David Callin is offline
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James, I see I didn't reply to your most recent comment. Sorry about that. Thank you!

Thanks, Jim, for the kind remarks. As to escaping from the shadow of Famous Seamus ...

Mark, would "And so they draw me on / but I can not keep up" be better?

Interestingly (I think, anyway), I realised (if that's the word), after posting this, that the sestet bears some sort of semblance to the ending of The Pied Piper of Hamelin. I'm still thinking about that.

Cheers all

David
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