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Old 04-11-2018, 07:58 AM
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Default Siham Karami at Autumn Sky

I wish I had written those last lines! A sonnet with dreamlike twists and turns, here.


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Old 04-11-2018, 09:20 AM
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Gorgeous poem, Ed. Thanks for calling it to our attention.

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Old 04-11-2018, 11:42 AM
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Thanks, Susan! And thanks so much for posting this, Ed! This was workshopped here so heartfelt thanks to the Sphere too and the help of the fine poets who helped me with it.

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Old 04-11-2018, 04:39 PM
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One of your (very many) memorable poems, Arrow!!

Wonderful to read it again today . . .

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Old 04-11-2018, 10:10 PM
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So wonderful to hear from you, Calligraphic One!! It was a surprise to me, not expecting to find it published. I shoot the arrow and forget it a week later...
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This is so keen and vivid, it brightens my day.
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Old 04-16-2018, 12:22 AM
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Wonderful, Siham! Thanks, Ed, for posting this.
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