[Susan d.S.]

My first effort in this form--a variation on the form--is up at Ghazal Page. It had its tentative beginnings here on the boards. Thanks to all who commented.

Here.

[Cally Conan-Davies]

Your first?!?! Oh, well done, Lily!!! (I love the Lily in the last line!)

[Aaron Poochigian]

Hot stuff, Susan. You had me with “Camellias” (one of the sexiest words ever) and kept me all the way through. “Wait” is a great word to repeat.
Congrats,
Aaron