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Unread 12-12-2018, 06:37 AM
Andrew Szilvasy Andrew Szilvasy is offline
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Hi all,

I have a quartet of poems up at "Loch Raven Review." Two ("Mysteries" and "The Pianist Plays Parcheesi") were workshopped here about two years ago and benefitted greatly from your expertise. Two others ("Beyond All Change" and "Tourist in Amsterdam") are among the first poems I wrote when I began writing poetry again that I was proud of then and continue to like now.

As always, thanks for your keen insights!
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What a nice home for the wonderful batch of poems. Congratulations!
So too for the life lesson, relevant today, at The Asses of Parnassus!

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Erik,

Thanks for the praise--and thanks for pointing out the Asses poem!
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Congrats, Andrew!
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Congratulations, Andrew
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Aaron and John,

Thanks for the kudos!
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Congrats, Andrew! I particularly liked the first poem.
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Congratulations, Andrew! My favorite was poem No. 1 with its sound argument and great imagery.
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Julie and Martin,

I'm glad you liked "Beyond All Change" in particular.
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