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Unread 07-07-2019, 08:04 AM
Jim Hayes Jim Hayes is offline
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Thank you Andrew, I enjoyed your critique, there are a couple of items I may well change, but ‘love in the air I will retain’ there is nothing wrong with a cliche, it’s just how it’s used and here it suited my purpose.

No problem Mark, I respectfully disagree with you and I don’t really care how folk interpret what I say as long as they understand, and while it may be placed in a ‘cartoonish set up ,’ your words not mine, the victim is clearly petrified long before the punchline.
Maybe it just needs a closer reading.
To repeat; there’s many a truth etc..

True enough John, however the message is there however obfuscated by the mode of delivery

Thanks all,


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