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Old 07-06-2018, 07:02 PM
Jim Moonan Jim Moonan is offline
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Thanks Bill. I hope provocative in a good way : )

It is a confluence of metaphors, I think. It's a confluence of other things, too. Dark and light, water and fire, dreaming and realization, multi-sensory experiences; and a confluence of confluences so that it all comes out in one breath. It was written very quickly.
Although it has gotten mixed reviews I'm happy with it -- and happy I was steered back to the original. It is the one that came to me.

Now it can go. Down, down, down.
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