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Default The Oldie "To See the Sea" comp by 22nd July

I can relate to this. I was 9 years old when I first saw the sea. A deprived childhood? Well, partly, but the best thing about it is that I can still remember the thrill of the experience; not many people can say that.

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The Oldie Competition
by Tessa Castro

Competition No 205
At the age of 34, King George III, they say, had never seen the sea. A poem, from whatever perspective, please, called ‘To See the Sea’. Maximum sixteen lines.

Entries, by post (The Oldie, 23/31 Great Titchfield Street, London W1W 7PA) or e-mail comps@theoldie.co.uk – don’t forget to include your postal address), to ‘Competition No 205’ by 22nd July 2016.
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To See the Sea

To see the sea takes eyes, you see,
but see what you will see:
the billowing foam,
the killer whale's home,
the toilet where tuna fish pee,

and so I advise, just look with your eyes
but never go swim in the sea,
for the fish never quit
turning plankton to shit
and the porpoises vomit with glee.
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Haha. That was quick, Bob, or was it one you already had?

I like swimming in the sea . . . well, I used to . . . I'm not so sure now!

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Haha. That was quick, Bob, or was it one you already had?

I like swimming in the sea . . . well, I used to . . . I'm not so sure now!

Jayne
Thanks, Jayne. No, it's brand new, written in the minutes before posting. I love swimming in the ocean, though I usually find it too cold.
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TO SEE THE SEA

You ask me how to see the sea?
Go the shore, and there it will be,

a floor beneath the dome of sky,
the Earth's reproach to all that's dry,

as huge as things on Earth can get,
and every millimeter wet,

then take a seat upon the sand
and banish every thought of land

and let the ocean fill your view
till nothing but the sea is true.
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To See the Sea: For the Navy Recruiters

'A VOYAGE ROUND THE WORLD' sells fantasy.
If you look from the quarter-deck below
You'll see the utmost human misery.
What filth! What crowds! Your ships move much too slow.
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To See the Seven Seas?

Sea is where fishes, not men's wishes dwell;
'A VOYAGE ROUND THE WORLD' sees men to hell.

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TO SEE THE SEA

I was born in a land-locked country,
far from a glimpse of the sea.
From reading I knew that the ocean was blue
and as big as a big thing could be,

and I knew it was home to great creatures,
like starfish and dolphins and whales,
and poets adored it, and heros explored it
propelled by the wind in their sails,

and I dreamed that someday I would see it,
I'd stand on the shore and behold,
but the years went by fast, and my chances all passed,
and my dream, like my bones, is too old.
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To See The Sea

I traced a Beach along, and waded
Till out of nowhere she upbraided
‘Get off my Private Property!’
I said ‘The Beach and Sea are free.
To claim the Sand on which I plod
You're bold, Mrs., for you trespass God.’
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Sea Legs to See the Sea With


If I give all my love to one or the other
why should you care who it is my mother?

I take my leave in the morn for the coast
to whale on a ship in the harbor named Ghost.

In the spray of the sea at the top of the mast,
I spot him basking in the waves at last.

We tack to the north where the cold is hard
and chase the white (from the nest) I guard,

where he spouts water mixed with icy spume
as high as the mizzen; we watch it bloom.

Our boats come to bear on the humping whale.
Harpoons are cast at his sides but they fail.

And still I give all my love to the sea
and the girls in the harbor of Ghost, at Lee.

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