Rachel: I really like that. "Cycling" through a prose section obviously has good potential.
Graham: Ha! If anything, your example shows up rather well how I often speak in airy abstractions—airiness. I've tried, a few half-hearted times, to erase some of my old blog entries, and I end up with similar airiness....The fortunate thing: Erasing my own prose, I don't feel as committed to not adding new bits or changing a verb tense, etc., i.e. do not feel committed to sticking to the stricter "erasure" process.
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