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Unread 07-14-2018, 07:05 PM
Andrew Szilvasy Andrew Szilvasy is offline
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Let's play.

Let's blank out all but the last word, and specify the part of speech if the sentence is incomplete.

Let's also keep it within the parameters of IP. A person can rhyme if he or she so chooses. But only one line, and let's say you can't jump back in for 5 lines. Let's end it at 24 lines, at latest, unless it's really going strong.

Let's see where it takes us. I'll start:




They search for stars among the puddles of


DON'T CHEAT!
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Unread 07-14-2018, 08:15 PM
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Hi Andrew,
There's no danger of me cheating. It's 2.15am, I'm in bed typing this on my phone ...(and I'm a blonde).
I don't 'get' this!

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Unread 07-14-2018, 08:31 PM
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Let's play.

Let's blank out all but the last word, and specify the part of speech if the sentence is incomplete.
Or. Let's not.

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Unread 07-14-2018, 08:36 PM
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Ok, that was snippy, but I couldn't resist.

I think I get it. It's like that drawing game, where you concertina-fold a piece of paper and draw a weird creature. One person draws the top of its head and leaves two little lines under the fold for the next person...

Sadly, I'm with Jayne on this one. Have you been at the espresso, Andrew?
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Unread 07-14-2018, 08:41 PM
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Let's end it at 24 lines, at latest, unless it's really going strong.
Such endearing optimism

(This is going to be a massive hit now isn't it, just to prove me wrong...)
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Unread 07-14-2018, 08:57 PM
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I just googled 'Exquisite Corpse'! Thanks Andrew, you taught me something new. I never knew the drawing game I used to play with my brother and sister had its roots in the Surrealists!

Hmm. Maybe I could get on board with this...

Edit: I should go to bed.

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