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Unread 11-17-2001, 09:00 AM
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Great stuff! I read everyone of them aloud to my delighted hubby.

Please feel "free" to participate in the Free Verse FunXcise too. Anarchy, I know -- but I'd welcome metrical verse there as well.
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Unread 11-17-2001, 06:37 PM
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Quote:
Originally posted by Clive:

To the tune of...well, I'm sure you can guess

D'oh - a deer, a long-dead deer!
Hey, somebody fetch a broom.
Gee - whoever put it here?
Are the cams on in this room?
No - they watch the employees
Bah! We'll never ever know.
We can stick it in deep freeze
And then serve it up to go-o-o-o![/b]
Brilliant Clive, just brilliant!!! --Ginger

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Unread 11-18-2001, 12:28 AM
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Thank you Ginger! You're on the Christmas card list.

Clive
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Unread 11-22-2001, 12:28 PM
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Kate --
what if you changed the topic to
"Merde et l'Amour"
"Merde, l'Amour"
"Merde est morte"
"Mordes la Merde"
"Mort et la Merde"

You know we could have fun with that too!
French lends itself so well to being misunderstood, n'est-ce pas?

Maybe we could combine the two stories and have Parisians poop-scooping behind dead deer. After all, they DO have McDonald's in Paris.
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