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Old 05-20-2018, 11:36 AM
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Mary, thanks for reading. “They feel it in the deep heart’s core” is sort of a jokey response to a reader who thinks that in all fairness to the other repeated rhyme words, “core” should be doubled. I proposed the “heart’s core” line since I knew he’d know it’s a slightly modified version of the last line from a Yeats’ poem. There will only be 14 lines in the final draft. Still staring at L1. (So far, changed repeated "seemed" to "thought" and shifted to first person plural).
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