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Old 04-17-2018, 09:07 PM
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Thank you very much, Jim. Let's hope I haven't ruined the piece.

I have decided to take Aaron N.'s suggestion and expand this "Prelude."

What do we think?
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Old 04-18-2018, 10:31 AM
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I think that the new section is very good but together the two sections do not feel complete. You may have set yourself up for a longer sequence, albeit an important one.
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