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Unread 10-09-2014, 06:53 PM
Martin Elster Martin Elster is offline
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Excellent, Siham! Congrats!

I like the polyptoton in the last line: “undoing overdue.”
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Unread 10-09-2014, 08:38 PM
Jean L. Kreiling Jean L. Kreiling is offline
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Really lovely, Siham--graceful and haunting. And a great venue, which I'll explore some more.
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Unread 10-10-2014, 03:03 AM
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Beautiful, Siham! I agree with others--the last line is lovely. And you're in some good company too.

Charlotte
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Unread 10-11-2014, 02:33 PM
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Thanks, Siham. A very nicely turned poem.

Nick
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Unread 10-11-2014, 04:34 PM
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Enjoyed your poem, very lyrical, it's a great ezine, the way it incorporates video and visuals is exciting, most ezines leave me cold but this one looks like a winner.
best wishes
Ross
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Unread 10-11-2014, 04:45 PM
Siham Karami Siham Karami is offline
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Martin, Jean, Charlotte, Nick, and Ross,

Thanks so much for your kind words! Martin, I can always count on you to stretch my sketchy vocabulary. Let's hear it for the polyptoton! Jean, this means a lot from you. I'm sure you can have your pick of venues with your fine work! Charlotte, yes, the place is loaded with talent -- I'm lucky to be there! Nick, you made my day. So glad you liked the poem and the placement, Ross.

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Siham

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Unread 10-16-2014, 03:47 AM
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Great, Siham!
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Unread 10-16-2014, 10:56 AM
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What the poem says is important, and how it says it is cool. Congrats, Siham!
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Thanks, Susan and Terese!
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