This is not a Drills & Amusements thread in the usual sense, where members are invited to chip in to amuse one another on the same topic.
But more importantly, you haven't posted a single critique of anyone else's work since you joined Eratosphere, and you have deleted 4 of the 9 posts you've made. From the Guidelines: You can edit your own posts. If you need a post deleted (e.g. a double post), please PM a Moderator.
You're required to post a minimum of 15 "substantive" critiques before you may post your own work, so I am locking this thread until you've done so. It just looks as if you are trying to cut corners here!