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Unread 10-18-2020, 02:01 PM
John Riley John Riley is offline
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My story "Bright Shirt" is up at the Molotov Cocktail

https://themolotovcocktail.com/vol-1.../bright-shirt/

A little change of pace
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Unread 10-18-2020, 02:44 PM
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I have read prose poems more prosaic, this was a pleasure to read.
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Unread 10-18-2020, 05:56 PM
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Congrats John, That's awesome!
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Unread 10-18-2020, 07:24 PM
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Wow, John, that's some tight compact narrative. Wonderful imagery – the "whore's eye" is inspired.
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What Cameron said. Great stuff, John. Congratulations!
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Thanks, everyone
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