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Old 10-03-2010, 01:23 PM
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A lovely piece of best Bazza. I wonder, though I only wonder, why you eschewed the stanza. We shall both win this, mark my words.
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Old 10-03-2010, 03:33 PM
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I suppose because initially I had in mind a continuous, flowing indeed, gobby 'confessive' monologue in the Robert Lowell fashion. It didn't turn out that way, no neo-heroic couplets & a much lighter tone, but though it would divide, at convenient & regular full stops, intuitively I like it the way it is.
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