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07-16-2018, 06:03 PM
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I happened on this poem yesterday and much to my delight. Congratulations, Melissa!
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07-16-2018, 08:32 PM
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Thank you, Erik!
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07-19-2018, 01:58 PM
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Brilliant, love the reversal.
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07-19-2018, 08:11 PM
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Love it! Thanks, Nausheen.
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07-19-2018, 10:34 PM
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I love this poem, too. And I also think the reversal in the last stanza is inspired. Congrats, Melissa!
Oh, and all those water words throughout are a nice touch.
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07-20-2018, 01:50 PM
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Bill, Gail, and Martin, I'm honored. This thread sure makes me feel warm and fuzzy (which is way more pleasant on a 90-degree day than I would have guessed...)
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07-28-2018, 03:33 AM
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I love her commentary.
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