If you compare the first draft in my workshop thread with the final product, my tremendous debt to those who commented on what worked and what didn't is obvious. Thank you, Team Eratosphere!
(Don't miss Michael L. Ruffin's quieter little poem, also posted at the New Verse News today, which makes a similar but somewhat different point about religious hypocrisy: https://newversenews.blogspot.com/20...tulations.html )