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04-15-2020, 12:18 PM
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Rick Mullin in NVN
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04-15-2020, 03:07 PM
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Much enjoyed your poem, Rick. Such fine work.
Richard
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04-15-2020, 03:18 PM
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Well, thanks folks.
RM
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04-15-2020, 03:48 PM
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Excellent poem, Rick. Congrats.
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04-15-2020, 07:34 PM
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Very enjoyable, Rick! And I also love the picture: "Hokusai Meets Fibonacci with Numerical Sequence" by Ars Brevis. I think James was clever for thinking of it.
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04-15-2020, 07:41 PM
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Thanks folks.
Martin, I really like that James Penha chose that image. It is the metaphor that closes the poem. I had assumed and more or less wanted a photo of an empty avenue in NYC. It was great to see something unexpected and perfect.
RM
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04-16-2020, 09:33 AM
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Wow, that was powerful. Fine work, Rick.
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04-17-2020, 09:27 AM
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I second everything written above. Just wonderful work, Rick. I read it again and again, bathing in that lovely diction.
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04-17-2020, 03:15 PM
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Thanks Andrew and Rob.
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