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12-31-2021, 08:11 AM
Susan McLean
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The New Verse News
One of Martin Elster's recent poems, workshopped here, was up yesterday at
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http://www.newversenews.com/
Congratulations, Martin!
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Thanks, Susan! Here's the direct link:
https://newversenews.blogspot.com/20...nderworld.html
Many thanks, Julie and Rick, for your comments and suggestions while the poem was being workshopped at Met.
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I like the "cousin" tweak near the end, which wasn't in the version I saw. Congrats, Martin!
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Thanks, Julie. Your feedback and suggestions while this was being workshopped were quite helpful. I'm glad you like "cousin." I think that one word changes the character of the whole poem. We are all cousins on this pale blue dot.
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