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Guys, I was just kidding with Rick about the 2016 elections.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/News_ticker
Ok. I was kidding too.
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You should apologize, then, for gaming members who have attempted to give you honest responses. Instead, you are gloating.
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Thanks for wasting my time and effort to help you improve this piece of garbage.
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Thanks for wasting my time and effort to help you improve this piece of garbage.
Easy, Killer. It wasn't that much time. Ha! Sam is just secretive.
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Roger, it isn't that far from jet-trails of Lysol to that heap of moldering towels.
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How about some useful interaction, Sam?
The poem just isn't interesting enough play peek-a-boo. Where you just trying to catch a general line of images that can fit over an array of human experience? Sports moment? The Trump Dallas thing? It just doesn't come through without something placing it.
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As a fact, it’s spelled “sephulcre,” and the pronunciation is not obvious. And chyron is the English professor’s word for that ticker tape thingo running at the telly screen bottom. Learn these words for the next quiz. Interesting poem about the swatting of flies.
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Andrew, football has been very important to me. Are sports, in general, metaphor? Yes, as are bridge, chess, and poker. Both single and group activities--practicing violin alone, playing trombone in band--can be competitive as well as communal. I like to think they are generally beneficial for those who participate in them. I don't think I could fully trust anyone who has never engaged in any of them, though there are many who cheat. At golf, especially.
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Allen, is that so?
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It’s clearly a locker-room scene post-game with a TV hashing the results as players react to their loss. I don’t get the use of “invest” for the scattered turf and tape. I can smell the sweat. At the end, showers, towels and tears implied.
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