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Old 07-24-2018, 12:20 PM
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Hmn. I think "vital sanctuary" is better than "living sanctuary."
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Old 07-25-2018, 11:31 AM
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I have settled on "antic" for "raucous" and "bustling" for "worldly." I think this poem is done--n'est-ce pas?

Any Spherians want to throw rocks at this glass house?

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Old 07-25-2018, 11:45 AM
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Oui! I think it's done. Love it. Don't forget to let us know when it finds a home. And it will.
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Old 07-25-2018, 12:29 PM
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Thank you, Catherine, very much for your French and enthusiasm.

Don't worry--I won't be shy about announcing its publication (if it comes).

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Aaron
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