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Old 08-05-2018, 12:46 PM
David Callin David Callin is offline
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Thanks John. I think those last two lines round the thing off nicely, but I could be wrong.

That's great Nemo. Thank you. I think it's finished too - it is an effusion of the moment, but (I think) true to that moment. Although the friend - the recipient of the other drink - to whom I showed this said "You're rambling. Sounds as though you need a drink." Philistine.

Mary, I feel your pain about the allusions. (Or allusion? Is there more than one?) An American friend, elsewhere, has proposed some sort of Lawrence Welk connection - does that help? Or you could just listen to the track itself, which she (same person) describes as "so mellow and campy and Lawrence Welk-y", which sounds fair enough to me.

Cheers all

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