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Unread 12-22-2004, 10:58 PM
Janet Kenny Janet Kenny is offline
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I have just been reading some poems by Anthony Lombardy, whose name is on the staff list here although he rarely appears.

I am knocked out by the ease and depth of his poems. I'm not sure how he would feel if I posted one here. I read them in his chap book on Web Del Sol. The thing that impressed me most was the easy diction and the range of forms, all handled with grace and insight. He writes effortless rhyme and effortless blank verse. The ease is the most impressive aspect of his work. I posted two others earlier then came back with this one which lingered in my mind.

Swans

BANNED POST(originally published in the "New Yorker")

The swans like wrecks in battle run
Aground upon this beach,
And bending bathers reach
For them with half a breakfast bun.

The fifty swans of Starnberger See
Have lost their dignity
And it is sad to see
Them flock beneath the Strand Cafe.

I linger on this shore defiled
By waste and cannot tell
The lame swans from the well
Or know the tame ones from the wild.

Perhaps there is no difference left,
Unless in summary things:
A blurring of the wings,
A different smell where they have slept.

All day I look for one that keeps
Away from shore and brings
The vessel of his wings
Into the far ravine, which leaps

Around these waters like a hand;
Like him I'd hold apart,
Refuse the sticky tart
They have uprooted from the sand.

Their loveliness is all a braid
Of everything I love-
What I'm complaining of
Is how we stoop and try to trade

A crust against that white estate
Which is forever lost
To everyone who tossed
Them bread and sat out talking late.

This transit of the trees and light
Whose changing crystal hones
The quality of stones
Into their evening, glancing height,

These stars asleep in chrome and keys
On shores where lovers park
And elevate the dark
With shadows onto rowing knees,

These things themselves, and rays that link
In commerce every end
Of human sight, descend
Back to their surfaces and sink,

As fifty swans compete for bread
From hands incautious of
The human way they shove
Into their circus to be fed.


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I wish I felt confident enough to choose more. I hope if he reads this he will let me know whether he minds my having posted this poem here.
Janet


[This message has been edited by Janet Kenny (edited December 23, 2004).]
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