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Unread 07-26-2002, 07:00 AM
ChrisW ChrisW is offline
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1.Is there a place for political poetry?

2. If so, what should political poetry try to do? (Or what things should it definitely NOT try to do?)

3. What CAN political poetry do? (Can poetry really have any effect on events?) And aren't other media (documentary film or prose essays) better suited to the changing of people's political opinions?

(For samples of political poetry, see the Agit-prop thread -- also see Richard Wilbur's "For the Student Strikers" and "Advice to a Prophet" -- and, come to think of it Auden's "September 1, 1939". I'd like to post the first Wilbur poem, but I'm afraid that might be in violation of copyright.)

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Unread 07-26-2002, 11:55 AM
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Chris,

My own opinion is, no. Here's why.

1.Is there a place for automotive repair poetry?

2. If so, what should automotive repair poetry try to do? (Or what things should it definitely NOT try to do?)

3. What CAN automotive repair poetry do? (Can poetry really have any effect on repairs?) And aren't other media (documentary film or prose essays) better suited to the changing of people's automotive repair opinions?

(For samples of automotive repair poetry, see the Agit-prop thread -- also see Richard Wilbur's "For the Student Strikers" and "Advice to a Prophet" -- and, come to think of it Auden's "September 1, 1939". I'd like to post the first Wilbur poem, but I'm afraid that might be in violation of copyright.)


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Unread 07-26-2002, 12:11 PM
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Tom,
There could be a good poem about repairing a car. Of course, it would be bizarre to speak of a whole genre of 'automotive repair poetry" -- there probably aren't that many poems on that topic, and anyway, who would want collect all such poems together as a group?

But many people would recognize a genre of political poetry, and there are definitely many poems whose topic is political -- and, in the case of "agit prop poetry" whose aims are fomenting revolution or stopping the Vietnam war or...

Of course, maybe you are simply being silly -- which is fine -- butif you have a serious point behind this, I think it needs to be spelled out more.

Chris
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Unread 07-26-2002, 12:20 PM
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Tom, you make a good point couched in a silly example. I take it your point is that a "political poem" must be, first and foremost, a poem, and "political" only secondarily. Too many political poems think it's enough to be "political" and that being a "poem" is secondary.

Forgive the diversion here, but I wanted to show you that it is indeed possible to write poems about automotive repair:

A POLITICAL POEM ABOUT AUMOTIVE REPAIR

My car broke down by the side of the road.
I opened the hood and and it started to spew
so much smoke I believed it was set to explode,
so I summoned an auto mechanic I knew
who told me, "Your car's not designed for a load
as heavy as this one. It's sad but it's true."
And so he arranged for my car to be towed
and asked me for money, but I just said "Who?"
He answered, "The money is properly owed,
so don't act so stupid. You know I mean you."


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Unread 07-26-2002, 01:00 PM
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[quote]Originally posted by Roger Slater:
[b]Tom, you make a good point couched in a silly example. I take it your point is that a "political poem" must be, first and foremost, a poem, and "political" only secondarily.

Agreed, Roger, but that just raises the question I was, in part trying to raise -- what makes one of these political non-poems a non-poem (not just lack of meter and rhyme)?

What are the aims of poetry, and what is it about many "political poems" that makes them bad as poems (or not even poems at all).

I suggested one answer -- that many "political poets" are too concerned with getting their readers to a particular conclusion, no matter how. The true poet is more concerned to make us see the world more clearly, more imaginatively. Any desires he may have about what conclusion we reach ought to be secondary. Poetry should educate, not propagandize.
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Unread 07-26-2002, 06:45 PM
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Wilbur's "For the Student Strikers" is, in a way, apolitical. It doesn't take a position for or against the strikers, rather advises the strikers that their confrontational style makes the differences between them & their opponents seem much greater than they really are. But this is perhaps what poetry does best in the political realm: it subsumes political activity in a higher human context. It constructively relativizes ideologies.

Auden was famously politicized in the 30s, an intensely political decade with the Depression and Communism & Fascism contending for ascendency. But his politicization was also in reaction to the ivory tower tendencies of poetical modernism as then established (Eliot, mainly). Thus it coincided with a reversion to more traditional, popular forms in lieu of modernist free verse. Which is ironic insofar as his formalism expressed a politically leftist position, whereas nowadays formalism is usually associated with political conservatism.

Auden was drawn to the Communists, but he never committed. Which is to say, he remained a poet. He felt passionately about the issues and expressed these feelings in his poems but never submitted to an ideology.

That's what poetry brings to the table.

Ewrgall's recent effort exemplifies the reduction of poetry to ideology. He totally identified with a certain ideological position & consequently abandoned any sense of potential irony or larger context, without which poetry is like a fish struggling to breathe on dry land.

Poetry refuses to forget what ideology forgets, and in that sense, is antithetical to politics. Or, it is a more conscious politics. It tries to infuse the political arena with an unaccustomed degree of awareness. That's what I think Wilbur was trying to do.
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Unread 07-27-2002, 03:03 PM
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Ah...

AE - has it ever crossed your mind that your view of poetics is politically motivated from an underlying and unscrutinised belief that poetry is in some way that I fail to see divorced from social reality? If one is divorced from society then one has no shared cultural discourse with ones audience. Poetry speaks the language of its writer to the audience of choice - and mainly it is the literate elites.

Poetry is political - it always has been - in form, content and voice. Lyric poetry is the politics of one class - social antagonism and politcal struggle is the the politics of another. Poetry is manipulation - it is an extension of rhetoric and aims to convince the already convinced or those who hover marginally at its edges. In the end the first rule of rhetoric applies - who is the audience. Each is different for each poet and poem. Mainly, modern poetry has been written by those not caught up in the struggle for economic survival - the middle and upper classes. When poetry is written for the sphere of the working class it has a very long tradition of resistance - ballads and songs that go back as far as poetry itself. It was the record of the tribe in war in ancient Arabia, it was the song of the Englishman against the French classical forms introduced by the Norman Squirearchy, it was the ballad of the Welsh, Scottish and Irish against the hegemony of the English, and so on.

What I see here is an abject failure for people on this site to see that poetry is an extension of politics by other means, to misquote Von Clausewitz. Apoliticism is just as much a poltical stance - one of the rich white - they can afford to be apolitical - Wilbur is a prime example of this. He stands somewhere in the hinterland of American White-dominated Capitalism - gaining from it but not opposing it as it has done him no disfavours. I would categorise most readers of this board in this way (including, but to a lesser degree, myself).

Essentially it is a failure to see that the history of poetics is a history of politics - do you not think that the primary aim of the Illiad was to support the wider idea of Greek hegemony in Asia minor, to reimpose the idea that the Greek world was in some way intrinsicallly better able to spread its militarism and imperialism across the then known world? It is a tract first - a poem second.

I find the idea that a poem has to be a poem first and somethng else second faintly ludicrous - on whose terms? What should a poem be? What is a poem? We can't even agree that so to advance further from this untenable position is a little like building castles on sand. A poem has to be successful? In whose terms? A poem must... a poem is successful if its audience believe it to be so. Rhetoric again. Any poem has a rhetorical gambit which it opens with the audience - it is why I dislike poems that take for granted that such and such is how the world works without ever asking questions to affirm that basic first principle - it is the world of 'nice poetry' - trite middleclassness that assumes the glass through which its world is viewed is the only one. That is not the case at all. The fact that working class ballads and songs are seen as superior as they do not engage in classical philosophy is elitist and political - there are many political songs and poems that are philosophically complex.

Moreover, it is absurd to say that something which fails to obey the dicta of middle class thought is somehow deficient - it all comes back to the argument on use - what is its use? Agit-prop poetry is for the raising of morale, against oppresiveness from the very class forces that support other areas of poetry - it is this social dialectic that propels the very antagonism between openly political poetry and that which hides its stygian light beneath a bushel. Agit-prop is for convincing those who are at the rough end of police beatings and scab labour that they should fight on -why does the middle class poet not write political poetry? His safe little world already has organised labour firmly whipped into place. Social relations have a comfortable edge - no people springing up demanding the overthrow of labour-capital. In modern day America, I see no socialists or anarchists - they were shot like Joe Hill and Sacco and Venzetti a very long time ago. Why is there any need for the financially secure poet of today to write about anything more than the pressing problems of love or the falling of leaves - death by bomb in one's house is another people's problem. Summary execution for breaking curfew is relegated to the days of the War of Independence, when those self-same 'terrorists' by modern standards overthrew their legal rulers.

Your failure to understand the history of politics viz poetics is absolute and one of the reasons that Americans generally speaking have no idea what is happening in the world - they are like Wilbur too busy navel-gazing in a comfortable world of poetic introspection.

A few links for you to check out - of course - no place for these in the political canon:

Come Out ye Black & Tans!
I was born on a Dublin street
Where the loyal drums did beat
And those bloody English feet
They walked all over us!
But every single night
When me Da would come home tight,
He'd invite the neighbours out
With this chorus:
Come out ye Black & Tans!
Come out and fight me like a man.
Show your wife how you won medals
Down in Flanders.
Tell her how the IRA
Made you run like hell away
From the green and lovely lanes
Of Killeshandra!


I dreamed I saw Joe Hill last night
Alive as you and me
Says I, "But Joe, you're ten years dead,"
"I never died," says he, "I never died," says he.
"In Salt Lake, Joe, by God," says I
Him standing by my bed,
"They framed you on a murder charge."
Says Joe, "But I ain't dead," says Joe, "But I ain't dead."
"The copper bosses shot you, Joe,
They killed you, Joe," says I.
"Takes more than guns to kill a man,"
Says Joe, "I didn't die," says Joe, "I didn't die."
And standing there as big as life
And smiling with his eyes
Joe says, "What they forgot to kill
Went on to organize, went on to organize."
"Joe Hill ain't dead," he says to me,
"Joe Hill ain't never died.
Where workingmen are out on strike
Joe Hill is at their side, Joe Hill is at their side."
"From San Diego up to Maine
In every mine and mill
Where workers strike and organize,"
Says he, "You'll find Joe Hill," says he, "You'll find Joe Hill."


"Because the clouds and the water are angry,
the four seas have great waves.
Because the wind and the thunder are angry,
the five continents shake".

Mao


http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/Museum/4959/poets1.html
http://users.erols.com/candidus/music.htm
http://www.ezlink.com/~culturev/CulturArt.htm
http://www.slip.net/~knabb/rexroth/index.htm
http://www.angelfire.com/mn2/anarchistpoetry/poets.html


Nigel

(Getting more than a little cynical about all this)
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Unread 07-27-2002, 03:47 PM
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Hi Nigel! Thanks for that. There are still some "political poets" in America. The first ones. The Aboriginal people. Joy Harjo, Louise Erdrich, Jeannette Armstrong. For the most part however, the audience for such poetry is limited to other Aboriginals. (I know whereof I speak) But that is much, I suppose.

From "Threads of Old Memory" by Jeannette Armstrong:

...When I speak
I choose the words gently
asking the whys
dangerous words
in the language of the newcomers
words releasing unspeakable grief
for all that is lost
dispelling lies in the retelling
I choose threads of truth
that in its telling cannot be hidden
and brings forward
old words that heal
moving to a place
where a new song begins
a new ceremony
through medicine eyes I glimpse a world
that cannot be stolen or lost
only shared
shaped by new words
joining precisely to form old patterns
a song of stars
glittering against an endless silence.


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Nigel is taking us to CHURCH! Ouch!

I found your points very carefully thought out and interesting.

I'll sit back and watch a while but would like to take issue with:

Summary execution for breaking curfew is relegated to the days of the War of Independence, when those self-same 'terrorists' by modern standards overthrew their legal rulers.

Okay, so who exactly are you calling "terrorists?"
Fighters for the independence of America? AND in what areas did this Summary execution for breaking curfew take place? I've not heard of this bit of American History and so I am curious as to who sanctioned it?

Your use of "terrorist" seems not very appropriate here. Perhaps you mean something else?

I really don't think that is a fair comparison.
Melanie

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Unread 07-27-2002, 05:11 PM
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--i should add: many of the poems in W. S. Merwin's
great book "The Lice" are politically engaged
but surrealist in form. they're better than almost
all of the more direct anti-war poetry of the time.

and poetry SHOULD be politically-engaged (or at
least, politically aware). being unaware in this
way is as detrimental to a poet as to not be able
to smell, or hear, or see, what things his poems
will be made from...

to make good poetry out of the empty rhetoric of
ideology, however, is flat impossible. the twencen's
innumerable examples should suffice. this still
happens, however, in poets who should know better,
when angered; writing while angry is like driving
while drunk.

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