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<H1>Notation in Poetry and Music (draft)</H1>
<H2>Poetry</H2>
Except for line-breaks, poets rarely use more notation than prose provides. Hopkins used stress-accents and Dickenson's dashes may have lengths that correspond to the intended length of pauses, but apart from these, line-breaks are the only non-prose way to indicate stress and pauses.

More advanced notations exist, used by linguists transcribing soundtracks, and by poetry theorists. Poetry theorists less often work from performance, marking up stress using purely the text, and breaking lines into "feet" - all of which makes their work rather subjective, and easy to manipulate to support their theoretical viewpoint.

Of diacritical marks the most commonly used have been
  • the acute accent for primary stress, stress in general, or "ictus"
  • the grave accent for secondary stress
  • the macron (a short line) to indicate a "long" syllable
  • the breve (u-shaped marking) for a "short" syllable
  • dots above or after the symbol to indicate duration
  • the caret (^) for pauses or omissions. Relative duration is indicated by addition of macron or breve or dot(s)
  • | to separate feet
In rhythmic analysis, diacritical marking of normal text is less satisfactory for most purposes than some kind of graphic transcription
  • Letters of an alphabet were used to represent prosodic values in ancient Greek prosodic (and musical) notation and in the ancient Sanskrit Chandahsutra of Pingala (where G = long or heavy, guru, L= short or light, laghu. Pingala used single letters also to represent systematic combinations of these values, or "feet": M =GGG, N = LLL, R = GLG, etc.);
  • More recently in English,
    • x (or .) = unstressed, a (or + or /) =stressed. Iambic pentameter may be represented as

      <tt>x / | x / | x / | x / | x /</tt>
    • S = stressed, O = unstressed, L = light stress, p = short pause or replacing a light syllable, P= long pause, or replacing a stressed (following G.R. Stewart, Technique of English Verse, 1930)
Less often, numbers have been used to indicate stress or pitch. Notations to support other features exist - e.g where long/short syllables (classical Greek and Latin poetry) or pitch (Chinese poetry) matter.

<H2>Music</H2>
Serious music tends to have been written before played, written in measures even if one can't hear them. "traditional" music often gets written down after it's been played. The choice of notation matters to the composer and the archivist of "traditional" music. It also matters to experimentalists and theorists. Quoting from <A HREF=http://encyclopedia.laborlawtalk.com/Musical_notation>Musical notation</A> - according to Philip Tagg and Richard Middleton
  • "musicology and to a degree European-influenced musical practice suffer from a 'notational centricity', ... a methodology slanted by the characteristics of notation
  • Notation-centric training induces particular forms of listening, and these then tend to be applied to all sorts of music, appropriately or not
  • Notational centricity also encourages reification: the score comes to be seen as 'the music', or perhaps the music in an ideal form."
Before music notation became standardised, several methods were tried. After standardisation the number of performance cues increased, but the notation remains restrictive. Alternatives have been developed. Graphic notation refers to the contemporary use of non-traditional symbols and text to convey information about the performance of a piece of music. It is used for experimental music, which in many cases is difficult to transcribe in standard notation.

<H2>Fusion</H2>

Conventional musical notation has often been adapted for rhythmic analysis of verse. For English, occasional and partial use of musical notation begins with C. Gildon (Complete Art of Poetry, 1718), and recurs frequently in the later 18th and 19th century; since S. Lanier (Science of English Verse, 1880) full musical notation has often been used by writers whose analysis of verse is musical or exclusively temporal. At the very least, duration of pause may be indicated by conventional musical notation for rests.

Music scores are for performers rather than receivers. In poetry, receivers "perform" the poetry when they read it.
Music notation tends to restrict composers. Extra poetry notation would in contrast restrict readers/theorists. It's unclear to me why so many poets with widely varying views on poetry allow such liberal interpretations of their work. Given the increasing specialisation of of the poetry audience, the paucity of auxiliary notation is surprising.
  • Phonetics - The text doesn't always unambiguously represent the sounds. The accent of the author may well matter. Even between standard English and standard American there are many pronunciation differences. If sonic effects mattered to the poet, one might expect some indication of how the words should be said. Composers usually indicate the instrument they're writing for; poets rarely suggest that (for example) a piece should be rendered with a Geordie accent.
  • Pauses - Music notation has clearly defined pause lengths. One can sometimes use metre to calculate the length of pauses. Line-breaks are coarse indicators
  • Speed - Should a poem be read slowly or quickly? Does relative speed matter? Again, line-breaks can be used - short lines are supposed to slow readers down.
  • Loudness - crescendos could easily be rendered.
  • Emphasis - bold/italic fonts along with upper-case are used, though newlines are more common.
Given the resistance to other notations, it's not so surprising that the line-break is so popular - a single tool with many uses. However, it performs none of them very precisely.

<H2>Interpretive Freedom</H2>
An interpretion needn't follow the author/composer's intentions. Sometimes (e.g. when actors in Macbeth dress as Nazis) it's done deliberately. Elsewhen (e.g when old music isn't played on period instruments) the decision may not have been consciously made. Some of these choices are controversial. Poetry readers have at least as much freedom as performers in other Arts. At poetry recitals audiences don't seem to mind an English male performing an American woman's poetry as long as the subject matter isn't too incongruous - sounds can be changed ("tomato" and "Z" pronounced differently), but words can't. Private readers may well make many unconscious (and uninformed) decisions.
Perhaps it's assumed that such misreadings are of minor consequence compared to conceptual misunderstandings, and that it's not worth cluttering the visual impact of the text to reduce the errors. The "look" of the text matters, especially when expressive line-breaks are used.

<H2>WWW</H2>
Nowadays it's nearly as easy to have sound online as text. Even movies aren't too hard, with optional subtitles, like a DVD. Perhaps the age of "The Master Text" is coming to a close.
Even restricting oneself to text, I don't think one need tie oneself down to a minimalist notation, especially now that color and graphics are cheaply reproduced.

<H2>See Also</H2>
This article has benefitted in particular from the first 3 sources (for which much thanks)
  • (from Poetry Magic)
  • <A HREF=http://www.propylaean.org/eppProsodicNotation.html>Prosodic Notation (James Craig La Drière)
  • <A HREF=http://www.absoluteastronomy.com/encyclopedia/m/mu/musical_notation.htm>Musical Notation</A>
  • "English Metrists", T.S. Osmond, (1921)
  • "Report of the Committee on Metrical Notation", M.W. Croll, PMLA, 39 (1924), lxxxvii-xciv
  • "Phonetic Transcription and Transliteration, Proposals of the Copenhagen Conference April 1925", (Oxford, 1926; mainly by O. Jespersen).
  • "Notations" edited by John Cage and Alison Knowles, ISBN 0685148645.
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Hi, Tim.

A few minor points:

1. I don't see the necessity for such a clear distinction as you draw between "diacritical marks" and "graphic notation." If a line is fully marked with diacriticals, one can of course read solely across the row of such marks without reference to the line of text beneath it; in effect, one is reading the diacritical marks as a kind of graphic notation for the line's rhythm.

2. Poe is another conspicuous example of a theorist who attempts to describe poetic rhythms in terms of precise musical terminology. Interestingly, since he bases his system on the classical quantitative convention that long syllables take exactly twice as long as short ones to pronounce, he translates iambic verse into 3/4 musical time (one beat for the unstressed "short" syllable and two for the stressed "long" syllable), and anapestic or dactyllic verse into 4/4--a very counterintuitive result for those of us who are accustomed to thinking of iambic as a duple meter and anapestic as a triple meter!

3. You note that "In poetry, receivers "perform" the poetry when they read it. Music notation tends to restrict composers. Extra poetry notation would in contrast restrict readers/theorists." Stylistically, I'd suggest that you replace "in contrast" with "similarly," "corresponingly,", or "likewise," since you're describing not a contrasting phenomenon but a parallel phenomenon, the inhibitory effect of too formalized a notation on the two different art forms.

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Interesting piece, Tim. I don't think musical notation is of much use in anything so stress-based, as opposed to duration-based, as Mod E verse. On the other hand, I can't think of any other way to teach Anglo Saxon, which weirdly combines quality and quantity, and of course, it is very helpful in understanding how to "say" Greek and Latin.
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Tim L,
Thanks for a fascinating post. As a singer who sang languages I didn't speak I quickly came to appreciate the difference between well set words and poorly set words. A good composer of vocal music fully realises the speech and for that reason it is not possible to translate their songs or operas.

Dancers too struggle for some form of "notation" and are even less advanced in the search than poets.

I wonder if notation can ever be more than a scholar's tool in poetry? Imagine losing the impetus of Shakespeare or Dylan Thomas as one tried to conform to some dessicated instruction?

I often wish that I could explain my metric intentions better. I am sometimes exasperated that we have no indication for an imprecise pause.
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ballet
and
modern ballet

(I keep getting a message that I am not able to post an edit or quote.)
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Thanks for the comments. It's a subject I know little about. I was curious why so few poets give directions to readers (but they're not keen on footnotes either, so maybe I shouldn't be surprised). Ta for the links Janet. I've seen dance notation before (I've even used the Poser program) but I know even less about that than about music. Having laptops with quicktime animations seems to me a viable way for dancers to work. Peter, I didn't know about Poe. I guess the "graphic notation" is seen as a replacement for the text, an abstraction that needn't keep a 1-to-1 match with the original text, designed as an aid to analysis. Diacritical marks would be useful to performers/readers.

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Diacritical marks would be useful to performers/readers.
Tim

I can see your point, but have to agree with Janet about too much notation: I think they would inspire uninspired readings. For me, actors / performers / readers have to make a piece their own.

My son's passion is singing, which he plans to make a career. The best piece of advice I heard being given to him, is to study the dynamics of the music, then throw the music away and sing from the heart.

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