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Aaron Novick 08-11-2018 01:58 PM

Exquisite Corpse 3
 
It's fun, harmless, and sometimes even leads to more serious poetry. So let's do it again.




However, starting in the middle has

Ann Drysdale 08-11-2018 02:03 PM

whatever the child has that has its own
.

Jim Moonan 08-11-2018 07:20 PM

x
my thoughts can twist themselves into a knot
x



(Btw Ann, that's the oddest reason for editing a post I've ever seen)
x

Aaron Novick 08-11-2018 09:12 PM

of tangled skeins and other nasties grown

Ann Drysdale 08-12-2018 02:58 AM

This is just an interjection for Jim, lest he should think I was suggesting something not in keeping with my reputation as a gentlewoman:

http://www.thinkenglish.me/phrases/press-the-tit.html

Carry on playing.

Jim Moonan 08-12-2018 08:30 AM

I rarely take note (or make note for that matter) of “reasons for edit” but this one seemingly called to me out of the ether. Now I know what it was saying: “Hey! You! Here’s a foot. Put it in your mouth.”
I knew of other meanings but none of them fit. So I wrongly assumed you had Freudianed it from the word "edit" -- Or thought maybe it was that dastardly creature "Spellcheck" that had done tit. (There it's gone and done it again).

A spades' not a spade.
A rose not a rose
but a tit's not a tit?
The gentlewoman knows.
x
x

I apologize. You are nothing but the gentlest woman in my eyes.
x

Ann Drysdale 08-14-2018 05:24 PM

out of proportion into freakishness

Aaron Novick 08-14-2018 05:30 PM

has got me starting to freak out—a lot.

Andrew Szilvasy 08-16-2018 08:50 AM

The electrical current sings accompanying jazz.

Aaron Novick 08-16-2018 09:39 AM

Oh, goodness—really? Now it's quite the mess.


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