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Old 08-11-2018, 01:58 PM
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It's fun, harmless, and sometimes even leads to more serious poetry. So let's do it again.




However, starting in the middle has
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Old 08-11-2018, 02:03 PM
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whatever the child has that has its own
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Last edited by Ann Drysdale; 08-11-2018 at 02:27 PM. Reason: I didn't edit. Just pressed the tit by mistake while browsing.
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my thoughts can twist themselves into a knot
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(Btw Ann, that's the oddest reason for editing a post I've ever seen)
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Old 08-11-2018, 09:12 PM
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of tangled skeins and other nasties grown
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Old 08-12-2018, 02:58 AM
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This is just an interjection for Jim, lest he should think I was suggesting something not in keeping with my reputation as a gentlewoman:

http://www.thinkenglish.me/phrases/press-the-tit.html

Carry on playing.
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I rarely take note (or make note for that matter) of “reasons for edit” but this one seemingly called to me out of the ether. Now I know what it was saying: “Hey! You! Here’s a foot. Put it in your mouth.”
I knew of other meanings but none of them fit. So I wrongly assumed you had Freudianed it from the word "edit" -- Or thought maybe it was that dastardly creature "Spellcheck" that had done tit. (There it's gone and done it again).

A spades' not a spade.
A rose not a rose
but a tit's not a tit?
The gentlewoman knows.
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I apologize. You are nothing but the gentlest woman in my eyes.
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out of proportion into freakishness
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has got me starting to freak out—a lot.
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The electrical current sings accompanying jazz.
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Old 08-16-2018, 09:39 AM
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Oh, goodness—really? Now it's quite the mess.
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