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Unread 05-02-2012, 02:29 AM
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This one "takes me there". I like the repetition of "that moves" in L5 and the suggestion of "Cold War" in L12. It's a pity that line is missing a beat. But the 2011 Nemerov winner had an extra foot in L7.

John
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