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Originally Posted by Brian Allgar
Well, I can't say it was much fun - definitely more a drill than an amusement.
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And I can't imagine that it's much fun for others to read... Still, I'd had a few drinks when I did it, and ivresse oblige.
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Je regrette... et au contraire!
I enjoyed your version, at least!
Good rhythm - while managing to remain still concise in monosyllables (I especially admire your terse clear replacements for 'disobedience' and 'forbidden').